Thread:Minus the omnipotent child/@comment-26257174-20150520030855/@comment-26257174-20150520173930

I'm assuming that you simply copied everything from here http://piratepad.net/DfEeqDzEjm and pasted it here http://fcoc-vs-battles.wikia.com/wiki/Hatoshi,_The_Boundless_Sheep. Well no offence but it's sloppy, everything is in very small text, the profile is very colorful as well and not in a good way.

So for the profile I'd give ya around a 4/5 or 5/5 but the format I'd give it a 5/10 but only because it's ur first time. If u were here for about a week or so and posted somethig like this it will git a zero.

I apologize if I offeneded you but this is my honest opinion. The character is great but the format is just nasty.

Do you want me to fix the format for you and I could up load those pics while I'm at it.