Thread:The-Nemian-Lion/@comment-25603146-20190531004744/@comment-25603146-20190531160351

Alright, then. Some of the things I've noticed:


 * The page background seems to have translated poorly, coming here to the code, and there's a fair few run-on sentences or odd cut-offs as a result. I can try to fix them: can you go over things again once that's done to see that everything's still accurate?


 * Lionman is supposed to have nine keys now, looking towards the bottom of the page, but several of the entries: Intelligence, Stamina, Range, etc.: are still outdated, carried over from the previous stats, and remain with much less than five keys. This makes it hard to differentiate between his capabilities in various other forms.


 * Many of the superhuman strength/speed/skill/etc. feats listed under "Notable Attacks/Techniques" would belong more in a Feats section than a Notable Attacks/Techniques section, which is more for, well, Notable Techniques that are different from his general powerset: the Primal States and Lion's Roar, for example.


 * Tanking attacks that deliver an energy over a period of time is not quite the same as taking that energy all up-front: there's a notable difference, for example, between getting punched one hundred times in a boxing match, and some superhuman punching someone's head clean off with a single punch one hundred times stronger than normal. What I mean by this is: Lionman's base form justification for his 5-A key: namely,
 * the head of the Neo Communist, Darya Vasiliev even goes as far to duel a tortured and weakened Lionman on a moon far away from Earth's solar system before ripping both his arms off, then his throat, leaving him in rubble before she decimates him with nuclear energy, 3,641,000,000,000 times that off the Tsar Bomba, per second for two minutes which has a 50,000,000 ton yield which means she hit him with 182,050,000,000,000,000,000 tons every second, that's 27.5 Earths per second! 3,300 Earths by the time she was done.
 * Is kinda off. The general cutoff for taking continuous attacks like this would be one second (i.e. the standard unit of time that the transfer of energy is measured with Watts.) 3.641 trillion times the Tsar Bomba's 50 megaton yield per second would be (5.0e+7 * 3.641e+12) = 1.8205e+20 Tons of TNT tanked. Which would be, going off of the Attack Potency chart, near-exactly the minimum Threshold of Small Planet level. That Lionman tanked it continuously, while already in that much pain, sounds more like a Stamina/Endurance feat than anything.


 * On a side note, how did he get his arms and throat back? Does Lionman have Regeneration? That's probably worth noting on his profile, I would think.


 * Side Note 2: Did/does Hades do anything aside from just be a 5-D entity? Does he have any powers? If so, did he use any of them against Lionman, and how did Lionman survive/beat them?