Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26517929-20170523220241/@comment-28113698-20170526140346

Alright, alright. I've read over your profiles, blogs, and whatnot and here's my input:

Dragon

Yes, your characters are interesting. We're amateurs and from what I review on a weekly basis in Seoul compared to your verses in terms of characters is like comparing burnt chicken to fresh chicked coming straight out the oven. But Darkmon is right, it's subjective opinion. But hey, this is the opinion of a guy who's been writing for 10 years and whose wife actually works on big animation projects so take it hoe ya will. I'd say keep building them up because your characters have potential.

AkuAkuAkuma

You my friend have well made pages and a intetrsting verse overall. I especially like the name "Seige" it's short and simple. In terms of quality? On an amateur scale it's 8/10 no doubt. It comes off to me like you aren't trying too hard, which is great. Too many peoplebwant to make grand and epic stories without even a general outline/plan.

Roymaster

1. Are the characters good? From what I've seen from Link yes. The fact that you are making a low tier verse puts a smile on my face. I'm curious to see how they develop.

2. Concept is nice. Nothing is 100% original as everything has been done by somebody but for a verse of such simplicity, you don't need a very expansive plot.

3. You can always improve by expanding on the characters. Really dig deep into their personalities. I'm not daying write a novel's length of description, but detail is good. Overall in general, the verse has potential like Aku's.

BlackDarkness

1. Verse is pretty neat, gives me strong fantasy vibes. Don't knowbit should but that doesn't matter ^_^'

2. For now, they are pretty good, a bit differently formatted but that's subtle differences so it doesn't matter. I understand your busy so I don't mind the WIPs. Taking your time is best anyway.

3. Same as with Roymaster's Heroes Unite! Just take your time, develop the characters, fully flesh them out, roleplay as them if you have to lol. Anything really.

My advice to everyone is to have a plan. This goes for anyone making OCs with an actual verse that has a story.

Let's say your an team of animators, writers, etc. and you hired Sera to be your Art Director. The first thing she will ask is for your script, where's your storyboard? do you have an outline. Plabning is always good. For those who just to have fun, do just that! No need to be so serious if you're only making a hobby to get your through school or whatever your reason may be.