Thread:CrossverseCrisis/@comment-26257174-20150719144405/@comment-26257174-20150719170515

Of course a character can have 100 feats ^_^. One of my character may have them....

Also are there any rules you'd like to add or modify. I'll try and remember the 4th and 6th rules..

Finally, I read through your story and it's pretty good (And this is coming from someone who utterly hates Good toe shoes MC's)  but you're making some grammatical such as the I's not being Capital letters and a few others. A story is usually judged by it's quality, length and grammatical format.... but its pretty good. Although I'd suggest giving each story an entire chapter or making them longer for better character development and a few other things. Sashi loving Aaron is kinda confusing as there's not much character development.

Btw what was it that Sashi whispered to Aaron. I NEED TO KNOW......