Board Thread:Versus Battles/@comment-30669038-20181219200055/@comment-30960504-20181219220409

Good short story,although few things to point out,the part with her commenting about lower races and the superiors,she wouldnt say stuff like this,also her adressing to Endymion with boy,she would use words like "dear" or "sweetie" or such instead,but overall as her creator,i approve how you wrote her here