Thread:The 2nd Existential Seed/@comment-27221100-20170512091417/@comment-26429591-20170512092431

My guess is that those are your verse variations of my own characters ? It seems very well executed, but there is something that relatively bothers me. The way you describe manifestations of HER. If you are not careful, some people may believe she is beyond tier 0, as some have though of Matthew, The Subjects, and Hitomi in the past, and I had to correct them on numerous occasions. It may not be intended, but if this is the case, perhaps you should note that these are not the equivalents of the real thing / other characters, but in-verse versions of other's characters , perhaps ? Other than that, I see no problems currently.