User blog comment:Promestein/Starcross - Birthday/@comment-28644276-20190302045434

Wew. Finally got to reading this technically, inaccurate, I got to reading this about 2 hours ago but somehow my bed acted on me with the drag of a black hole and what should have been 7 minutes became almost 2 hours, judge me.

Since it's my fave we're talking about here, I will go by parts instead of measuring words on this one.

Anyways, to begin I'll say that the setting up of the various atmospheres throughout the story is greatly done. I felt almost as immersed in the present as SOLSTICE there at some moments. The narrative was pretty good to me at creating that atmosphere of desolation or, as I generally say "Gray Days" to show a sort of bleak perspective from the character.

But while the construction and overall atmosphere of the scenery is certainly something I can appreciate like any reader out there, of course my attention would be more in the central part of it - the character who's in it.

So from the next comment onwards I'll start "following" SOL throughout this and giving my general impressions on each part.