Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-30542316-20170522204707/@comment-26429591-20170526142535

'''Premnios . I believe this can serve as a  REAAALY good example'''

Where exactly do i begin with this ?

- Lack of organization.

- There is creativity here, but not that much of it.

- Having so many omnipotents in one verse.

- Unless i am mistaken, the lack of detail required to be even tier 1 is missing here.

- 0, definitely FAR HIGHER ?! ...!  NONE of my characters here have joke-tiers this ridiculous here.

Don't get me wrong. The idea is good, but is executed not so well. I recommend we let this person know that the profile is in the need of tidying up.