Thread:Minus the omnipotent child/@comment-26257174-20150520030855/@comment-26257174-20150521135241

"She can also give Omnipotence out to other life forms, and still retain the exact level and authority she has now" It's better to change Omnipotence to Nigh-Omnipotence as Omnipotence itself contradicts itself.

Btw it's ok for now but you should really post your verse page as something like this. Crossverse or this The Forgotten Realms

Also there's a profile making competition I'm hosting here on the 28th so do ya wanna join in.