Thread:Xmark12/@comment-24992802-20180317011540/@comment-26134263-20180317233428

Sounds good so far.

Some things that should be tweaked though are these:

True Deities wouldn't really be on Gyrohem, as it's nigh-impossible for even the strongest of Deities to be on Gyrohem, as the Core would automatically percieve them as a threat. So far Zaunig seems to be the only exception. Maybe instead of true Dieties they're beings who've lived on Gyrohem ever since life itself was birthed on the planet, making them one of the strongest beings on it, apart from the Core's Avatar, who's still massively stronger than all of them combined. Maybe Umia is one of these age old beings, and then everything else you described happens. Zaunig could take an interest in her because she's one of the few in all of the timelines who has survived an encounter against the Core's Avatar, excluding Linx.