Thread:Jedialex02/@comment-26134263-20180129005412

Yo, just wanted to let you know that Tamika’s stats (such as AP and durability) make no sense at the moment and have no reasoning behind them. Sorry if I sound blunt but I’ll try to be as straightforward as possible on what’s wrong and to give recommendations on how to make your page better.

I’m doing this because I don’t want an admin to see it at its current quality and say it’s bad enough for a delete (I know from experience because it almost happened to me). These are all suggestions and things I’ve noticed, so you don’t have to consider all of these points.

Anyways, first thing I want to point out is pretty small, and that you’d usually have to spell out the entirety of the tier in Attack Potency. What I mean is that right now your Attack Potency says the tier numbers (4-A | High 4-C | 5-A to 2-A) and not the actual spelled out words (Multi-Solar System level | Large Star level | Large-Planet level to Multiverse level+). I recommend just doing this: Attack Potency: Multi-Solar System level | Large Star level | Large-Planet level to Multiverse level+

In case you didn’t know, those are 4-A, High 4-C, and 5-A to 2-A respectively.

Second, and, oooh boy this is the big one, and why I named the title like I did… The stats do not make any sense! The big reason for this is because there’s no reasoning behind any of the stats. Why is Altair Large-Planet to Multiversal+ but her durability is City-Block? Why are their speeds like that? Why do they have that level of lifting strength? Reasoning is extremely important in describing a character.

For an example of what I mean by reasoning, Shiryu Rain is a pretty good example. All of his stats are explained and have reasoning behind them, such as him being At least City level because he can casually destroy a city, or him being Universe level+ because he can erase an entire timeline.

What I’m basically trying to say is just give reasoning as to why your character is that speed, or is that strong, or is that durable for each. Without reasoning, the page would look extremely confusing to an on-looker. Most good pages on this site have reasoning for each stat, so just check some out when you have the time.

Alright, third. You actually do have a reasoning for Altair, albeit it’s… not really a reasoning at all. Altair on the main wiki is only Low 2-C (Universe level+) at her strongest, so why is your Altair 2-A at her strongest? Also, “all of Creation that originated from Earth” is extremely vague, because all of creation means including stories that have Tier 0s. Hell, that includes joke characters who are beyond Tier 0 also! Characters who can’t be beat no matter what! I think it’s safe to recommend that your Altair should just be around the main series’ Altair (Low 2-C), and the reasoning for that should be something like “Comparable to canon Altair”.

Fourth and possibly last is addressing the seemingly random tiering. It just seemed like you threw a bunch of stats together on each section (Speed, Dura, Striking Str, etc) without even knowing how powerful or how not powerful each is. You established that this character(s) is 4-A (Multi-Solar System level), High 4-C (Large Star level), and 5-A to 2-A (Large-Planet level to Multiversal level+, even though I think these stats should be changed to just Low 2-C [Universe level+]). Here’s what I recommend:


 * Match the Attack Potency, Striking Strength, and Durability together, ex: 4-A Attack Potency, Striking Strength, and 4-A Durability, High 4-C Attack Potency, Striking Strength, and High 4-C Durability, etc. It’s usually agreed upon that unless there’s a durability feat that contradicts this, Attack Potency and Durability are usually the same. As for Striking Strength, usually it’s the same as Attack Potency unless they got that Attack Potency through hax/abilities and not their own strength.


 * Give reasonings as to why your character(s) are Sub-Relativistic+, Massively FTL+, and Hypesonic+. If you need to see examples of how fast these speeds are, check out the Comprehensive Speed Scale.


 * Give reasonings as to why your character(s) have those levels of Lifting Strength.


 * Range is usually as far as their AP, so in your case, the range for your character(s) goes like this: Multi-Solar System | Large Star | Large-Planet to Multiversal+


 * Give more feats for your character(s).

Sorry if I sound like a dick or something, it’s just that I think you want the quality of your character to be higher than it is currently, and as of right now it seems to be on the level of being bad enough for at least a warning. I’m also not saying you should follow everything on here, since these are just suggestions. Just choose which ones you do want to follow.

Aaanyways, hope things are good on your side, and I hope this helped! Just text back if you need more clarification. I’ll try to not be as blunt or critical next time. 