Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24992802-20160728174134

I might revamp my verse, because I'm starting to care more about character development and longer arcs. The hardest part for me is always coming up with names, because I've got a nigh infinite amount of character design ideas in my head, and I don't want any of them to have ridiculously stupid names. How would any of you rate my verse and what would you like me to improve upon? 