Thread:Smashtwig/@comment-34461919-20181029063439

Only noticed two problems: Saw this whole Omnipotent Cataclysm thing again. Just get rid of the Omnipotent part. If he's defeated, it's not even a question. If it's just that he was seemingly Omnipotent compared to everyone else, make that more clear. Other thing is I saw an ABSOLUTE in the Astral Energy section, but given the previous case was just in verse stuff, eh.

Other than that, it's definitely well done. 