User blog comment:AkuAkuAkuma/Merry Crew of Madness/@comment-31405318-20171013004342

So for ther first one...

That is honestly a really saddening story but makes a lot of sense. I felt so bad for the two and the torment they went through and even in their end, they become much more. A being of all that sorrow and torment brought back as an entity that was the embodiment of all that they felt. This concept is executed very well and uniquely in my opinion, and the way you write still awes me.

Second one.

I always like beings that directly correlate with the 7 deadly sins. If it's pulled of right, I find it quite interesting and good, and this is one of those. A chaotic entity born of Envy and Greed...these things together form desire. Wanting something and doing whatever you can to get it. Very cool indeed this is and am very interested with how it will play in the grand scheme of things.

Finally...third one...

Looks good so far and well...I don't like where it will be going (In a good way mind you. I love suspense) but am interested in it.