Thread:Dragonmasterxyz/@comment-26429591-20170217014613/@comment-26517929-20170217170906

To be blunt. Everything.

-This is OP for OP's sake in which is something we frown upon as seen in this thread.

-Too many images. Put them in the same tabber.

-Beyond an Omnipotent Character who also is very complicated. i.e Hitomi. So fix that.

-Your file really doesn't make sense. He sounds like a Nigh Omnipotent 3-Dimensional being.

-Everything is extra crowded with stuff and confusing numbers that could really be explained in a few words.

-Is franky hard to read to the point I nor any other member wants to go in and read the page.

You have your work cut out for you, but fix it or it will be deleted next Friday.