Thread:Cshamiel/@comment-27160111-20161106050040/@comment-30453943-20161106133200

TISSG7Redgrave wrote:

Wanker369 wrote:

TISSG7Redgrave wrote: I plan to do the edits later on focusing on the story first cause i plan to review it just takes a while... Thank you for understanding, cause it's really important for a story to own simple details such as a coma The funny thing is you sound like my friend in Real Life again it will take idk how long to check those cause you can see how long 2 complete chapters + 1 ongoing is so that's why i focused on the story first the comas and all that jazz will be later on after the tedious part is done... Oh so let me edit it if you don't mind. Don't worry, I won't change anything in the story.

Ps: even now, you didn't add a coma and a full stop in your sentences